(#) XBrokenPromisesX 2013-04-17Hii I'm Dannie
I' m pretty much new to writing fan-fiction but I've started a story called 'Belle Cauchemar', I've only posted one chapter but i was wondering if you could review it in your episodes. It's probably not worth your while seeing as there is only one chapter, but if you could that would be great. http://ficwad.com/story/215621
thank you :)
(#) glostick86 2013-04-17Thank you so much for reviewing my story. I'm taking your advise about re-writing my story in third person. Oh and my husband also pointed out about the POV shifting in the chapters. As for the spelling and grammar, this was before I got my new laptop so now I will be fixing it. Thanks again!
(#) ToInfinityAndBeyond 2013-04-17Is it bad that I sat here and cried over your kind words? Thank you, so very much, for everything you said! I've been going through rough patches right now and to hear those words.. It gave me hope again, like I have a purpose. Thank you so much, Casey/Kasey/however you like to spell your name. I have a Panic! oneshot to finish writing, so I hope that I can get you to review that! Thank you, thank, you, THANK YOU!
Lots (and lots) of love,
- Hey, I'm Ash Finnigan, but you can call me later. (Oh god, Ash, pickup lines on the stranger. Nice one.)
Anyway, I think you're completely wicked, and I'd seriously fucking flip if you could review my shit.
"The Light Behind Your Eyes" - http://ficwad.com/story/212862
"Too-Loo-Rye-Ay" - http://ficwad.com/story/217290
"It's All For You" - http://ficwad.com/story/217302
"Scars" - http://ficwad.com/story/216822
"Turn Away" - http://ficwad.com/story/212883
I know it's a lot, but I'd really like it. Thanks, bro.
(#) ColorfulShadow 2013-04-19Hi! If you don't mind, can you review my story?:
I watched your video, you rock. I would really like advice on some things, and you don't have to read the whole story since I know you have a lot to read.
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