Billy didn't take the cigarette away, tho he felt the burning pain on his farearm, felt the burning ash scorch his skin. It was the pain that still kept him alive. His fear of dying that kept him h...
I enjoyed this. I thought it was really interesting, the sort of story that your mind keeps coming back to. Great job!
...and my last rating point left for this week goes to this. `couse this is haunting - hauntinly beautiful.
Well reseached, well thougt out, well written. Fine chinseled handwork and emotinally touching.
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