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Be Happy With Me
(#) SyraStrange 2013-05-17
You're reminding of someone I know and I don't know if it's a good thing. If you're feeling down, it's good to cry to new ears. And when it thins out, it's always going to boil down to you being happy with, well, you.
-SAuthor's response
Thank you, I get what your saying. One day I hope I'm happy with myself.Be Happy With Me
(#) beatus_quinn 2013-05-17
Your poems kind of break my heart. I've got you and Rah Rah figured out, you see.
As you know, Rah Rah has amazing words. She can make everything so mindblowingly tragically beautiful that it leaves me kinda in a haze.
Your poems are kinda like knives. Shorter and simpler but if Rah Rah leaves me in a haze, you leave me staggering and stumbling and falling. Your words are more like the words that broken kids scream into the air.
Different kinds of beauty.
Please don't take offense from this, I just think that your poems are wonderful.
I love you so much, Abbie.Author's response
Thank you, I love you too. Sometimes I can write happy, but i like writing about the nasty truth.Be Happy With Me
(#) SyraStrange 2013-05-17
You will be happy with yourself. You're an amazing person. You just need to believe it to be true. Let the poetry pave a way into finding some peace, it's one of the best kinds of therapy, in my opinion.
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