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Reward and Punishment
31 reviewsA kiss on the cheek? Fleur knows better than to think that's enough, and she's not the only one.
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Reward and Punishment
(#) tara_li 2013-05-24
Here's hoping there's more to this! Thanks for a fun start.Author's response
Glad you enjoyed it. More is on the way.Reward and Punishment
(#) MiFo71 2013-05-24
Thanks for publishing this.
And a "+1" to tara_li's hope for more.Author's response
You're welcome; I thought a broader audience might appreciate it.Reward and Punishment
(#) mazman117 2013-05-24
I enjoyed this chapter very much. I hope there will be more soon.Author's response
Glad you enjoyed it, and hopefully there will be as I get back to writing.Reward and Punishment
(#) chanewt906 2013-05-24
Outstanding; wondering about Hermione's line about making him feel better before the task - is there something you'd like to share with the class, Mr. BrianJ?? (peering over glasses)
Came to leave review and noted you saying more was coming - Excellent!!Author's response
Get your mind out of the gutter (it's crowding mine). I meant that which you read in Goblet of Fire. Mostly.
Thanks for the review!Reward and Punishment
(#) Nakor 2013-05-24
Very nice, I like it!
Looking forward to see him meet the feathered girls ...
Hope he doesn't forget to learn other things too.Author's response
Don't worry. That won't be a problem. Thank you for the review!Reward and Punishment
(#) dennisud 2013-05-24
obviously Racy start! just be careful it doesn't become too ungainly with a number of girls with Harry! Too many good stories get bogged down with the building complications of Harem or even a trio!
dennisudAuthor's response
I understand your concern, and will do my best to keep things manageable. I know that things can get out of hand, but I do have some ideas I'd like to try and which you will hopefully find interesting.Reward and Punishment
(#) Ryudo3 2013-05-25
Glad to see you have come back to start writing. You have some really good stories. Can't wait for the nest chapter.Author's response
Thank you! Good to be back.Reward and Punishment
(#) makarva 2013-05-25
interesante, muy interesanteAuthor's response
Muchas gracias! (Hablo muy pequeno espanol.)Reward and Punishment
(#) cold7 2013-05-25
Great to see you back!! Original as always, please continue this one!Author's response
Thank you! I'll continue as best I can.
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