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And As The Sun Went Down
(#) atomickilljoy 2013-06-06
WHAT DID SHE SEE?!
This is so suspenseful.
Update soon. Ily.Author's response
Hehe il update soon :DAnd As The Sun Went Down
(#) mychemicalpony 2013-06-10
Good storyline, but the spelling makes it hard to read, so you need to find someone who can correct the spelling mistakes (not change any of the plot, literally just the spelling) and it would make it so much better. I know I'm willing to do it for you but it's up to you if you decide to take this on board or whatever :)And As The Sun Went Down
(#) AmericanHorrorStory 2013-06-11
Omg bb this rox my sox omfg update soon.
HAHAHA, no.
Once again, a beautiful exhibit of badly written fanfiction and trolling.
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