- Cold and nasty! Well done.
Author's responseWhy, Thank You. I tried. Originally I only wrote the scene with Dumbledore, because I have a good set of ideas of how I wanted that to go down. Early reviewers asked for more, mostly the scene with Tommy, some about the Ministry, so I gave it a try. I still don't feel either of those is as good as the one at Hogwarts, but I did my best to give a W&H twist to both.
(#) foolishwandwaver 2014-02-25I thoroughly enjoyed this story, extremely well done. Now... how about another expansion to tell how Harry got Wolfram and Hart to be his lawyers? And since you are nailing almost everone...what about the Weasleys? Shouldn't they figure into the story somewhere? Just a suggestion though. Again I repeat...wonderful story.
(#) Hortensia210 2014-03-23Good that you left the hint to read this story too. It's a delightful story, if not still a bit short... I’m sorry, but I’m usually in for long stories and was rather looking forward to a detailed account of the legal actions undertaken. Still, this is very well done, condensed but very good. Thank you!
- I agree with Hortensia210. This story while good looks ripe for some expansion particularly with reactions from Harry and his classmates. You have a very good place to start with your reference to Draco. I'm not saying you should go there first but since the Malfoy Heir is mentioned...
- Beautifully done and I look forward to the companion stories dealing with Harry and his classmates as his status in the wizarding world, and the non-magical world drastically changes (with the death of his father, the younger Malfoy and with the Dursleys as they find out just what they've thrown away and what they could have had. Beyond that, -this- Harry moving in the wizarding world should definitely cause some "ripples".
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