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Give It Your Best Shot
(#) etuncan094 2013-08-05
Oh my gosh! My heart is pounding from reading that intense chapter. I can hardly wait for what comes next. Keep up the wonderful work!Give It Your Best Shot
(#) smeagol 2013-08-06
Better than I expected. You continue to open more possibilities of further development with each chapter you write.Give It Your Best Shot
(#) lleon 2013-08-06
This story has more layers than an onion and I'm loving it.
James obliviated Harry when he was 8 years old!
Sirius and James are under Auror suspicion due to alleged murder of Peter Pettigrew!
I wonder if Frank Longbottom truly is trustworthy though, just because Neville is, doesn't mean his father has to be.
Sirius' wife and family seem to have vanished and since when did the Black family had a castle?
Oh well I'm sure all will be revealed in the upcoming chapters.Author's response
Wow! Thanks so much for all the reviews. It's interesting to read about a reader's thoughts as they progress from one chapter to the next.
I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far. :)
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