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this is the fixed version, somewhat better than my original hope you like it R&R





"Ugh dad why do I have to go I don't want to see anymore peasants especially outside"
"they are family you have to go to the family events and you know that"
Great another 'family event' but this time it's a party a birthday party hell this kid is a few years younger than me why is he having a birthday party
After I get dressed into my black misfits top and black jeans I smudge my eyeliner and brush my hair then going into the car
"fuck WOULD YOU HURRY UP IT'S HOT"
Already sweating in the car great
Finally after what seems like forever my dad and his girlfriend come and we begin to drive their 
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as usual I fell asleep and am awoken by my dad and told the obvious 
"We're here"
I stumble out of the car dust my self off and catch up with my dad they do the usual greetings and shit but we come it contact with people who aren't family so they are probably friends of the kid throwing the party 
As I always do I inspect and remember the appearances I see the mum and dad a boy that look younger than me who eventually runs off with some kids to play 

"yes our son Mikey is quite good friends with him"
"yes he is her cousin infact haha"
"oh well look at you a quite nice young lady you look very nice"
I smile and murmur thank you as kindly i can 
"you look around my sons age he's right over there let me introduce you to him come over" I get quite tense and not wanting to move I dont know how to talk to people and then guys; this will be quite the fun 

"here this is Gerard and you are"

"I-I'm S-Scarlett"
I stutter with an extended hand that's shaking 
Gerard shakes my hand and we both get seated awkwardly across each other
"you two have fun" gerards mum goes off to chat with the elders leaving me and Gerard to an awkward chat ~funfunfun~
"so uh Misfits huh?" he said looking at my Misfits tee 
"uh yea" I looked at him then down to my lap
"what's your favorite song?"
"I uh..I like hybrid moments you?"
His eyes lit up with excitement 
"that's my favorite too"
"oh uhm cool"
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After a awkward few minutes  he finally asked me if I wanted to go for a walk 
"sure"
He then led the way to our destination 
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We ended up at an abandon house we went threw the backyard and he easily opened the glass door leading into what I believe was the living room
It was furnished, surprisingly 

"so uh what do you think?"
Snapping out of my thoughts I reply
"its nice for uh not being lived in"
 He leads me into a bedroom and that's when I get extremely worried. Thinking if all the bad things that could happen
we just met why would he kill me
I haven't done anything to him
dear god I thought he was a nice guy
Soon my breath gets cut short 
great a panic attack
I am struggling to breathe and I'm getting extremely worried 
what happened now I feel as if I'm going to die oh my god
Gerard turns around and see me struggling he panics and stutters to find words of comfort 
 
"a-are you why-what's happening"

I run out of the house and collapse on the ground in the backyard trying to find something to help but not knowing what could help still struggling to breathe I turn and see Gerard running to me

"my friend used to get these alot just breathe"
He says then breathing at a steady pase for me to mimic
After I am steady and relaxed I thank him and we stay in the backyard 

"sorry I just over thought something a-and I ya"
"It's okay I get it" 
He says to me with a reassuring smile 
I smile back and think why I even had the attack 

Breaking threw my thoughts once again Gerard speaks
"do you want some water usually when my friend would get those he'd feel really nauseous"

"y-yea sure"

He runs into the house leaving me to look around the dead yard
He quickly stumbles back to me and hands me the water

"thanks"
 I smile at him and reach for my pocket;my phone was buzzing

where are you we are about to leave

I hadn't told my dad I left, had I?"

I'll be right there

"i need to get back"
We both stood up and were incredibly close 
wow his eyes, they are perfect

We stood for a second then he looked down breaking whatever was happening 

We walked back in silence his hand occasionally brushing mine making me tingle 
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arriving at the area of the party I see my dad saying goodbye to some family friends 
I turn to Gerard not wanting to leave 

"so uh how will we-"
He cuts me off with a kiss. I'm surprised at first but go with it because what else am I supposed to do 
We stop and he looked down as he blushes I try to come up with words but I couldn't quite comprehend what had happened 
I scribbled my number on his arm then pecked his cheek with a kiss 
"I'll keep in contact" i told him then ran off to leave


so what do you think is this one better?I like it R&R guys ;W;