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- "what you gonna do when the lake goes dry, honey?" - it's classic american boasting, man, really.
don't feel so shitty, do you? it's okay, alright, dude, the thoughts that make up your head are all working together and they go BOOM.
but it's like the best damn explosion i've ever heard.
i just enjoy this piece far too much...is that wrong to say?
please take this as a compliment. :)
Author's responsei will, thank you!
it's really taking some thin lines and thick lines and making them realize they're just lines anyway
but...yes you are thin and you are thick
do we overgeneralize or do we wear ourselves down nit-picking until we were all unrelated?
when do we hit some middle ground?
when do we just give up?
well, lovely, it makes me happy to know you enjoyed, that's more than i could ever ask for, seriously thank you.
- This. Is. Fabulous. So many thoughts. I'm speechless. Love it. So so so so so so so much. Just saying.
Author's responseno, no, you aren't just saying! thank you so much. i've always wanted to be fabulous (or at least fabulous by association of work).
it's really just playing around with rhyming words, syllables, and rhythmic patterns. the piece as a whole kinda falls in there afterwards, when you tweak it around. so this little ol' thing was more or less a chance game, if you know what i mean.
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