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(#) tjsparkles 2013-09-26LOVE the title. Bucky Covington, right? Side note: I thought of Mox smirking and saying "It's good to be the King". Smarmy bastard.
I'M SO GLAD THAT YOU DECIDED TO WRITE THIS. It's the first thing I saw when I woke up this morning, and I roared when I read the summary. We've written so many fics via our convos that it's not even funny.
“Hey, what do you say we ditch the book and do some hands on learning?”
HE WENT THERE. HE ACTUALLY SAID THAT, THE CHEEKY BASTARD. HE WOULD SAY THAT, TOO. That characterization. I love it.
I'd smack a man for throwing my book out of MY hand in bed...then again, this is Jon Moxley. Could you really kick him out of bed? He's disgustingly charming. It's sooo unfair.
I like how used the word "tome" instead of book. The connotation sounds so much better.
“I think we can come to a compromise…” he chuckled, tightening his grip on her.
I BET I KNOW WHAT KINDA COMPROMISE HE'S TALKING ABOUT. For his benefit or for HERS?
"grinned wolfishly" That's exactly how I'd describe it. A wolfish grin. He's the big bad wolf come to life.
The teeny bit of smut you gave was very well-written, steamy but not too steamy, and realistic. You're better at that than you might think.
LOVED THIS, sis.
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