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Harry Potter And His Twin Sister

by dramagirl007 1 review

This story is about Harry Potter and his twin sister Brenda. It is mostly Brenda's story. There is a lot of Severus Snape in this story.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters: Harry - Chapters: 3 - Published: 2013-10-07 - Updated: 2013-10-07 - 5873 words

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Harry Potter And His Twin Sister

(#) COLD1 2013-10-09

Can someone say "Self-Insert"?

And get a beta, your writing is clunky and stiff, there are plenty of spelling and grammar errors, and overall, this is something we've ALL seen at some point.

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