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The List
(#) zaxxon 2013-10-17
Very interesting.
I take it from this chapter that Hermione is number one on Harry's list. Which is logical, I would think, and also the measuring-stick for the other girls on the list.
You had mentioned "harem," so I'm now thinking those on the list will be the one's to receive an invite to Harry's harem, which admittedly wasn't where I thought this would go.
The list itself, I find interesting, and the reasoning behind why each girl is on it and where fascinating.
Looking forward to seeing whose number eight through two.Author's response
Ah... I'm just realizing that I never mentioned that this was a Harem story. Whoops. On my website, I have it titled "The List, a Happy Harry Harem Fan Fiction." I guess I didn't make it too obvious, did I?
Where did you think it was going to go? I'm glad I escaped the cliche of Harry runs off with Number One, while tasting the fruits of 10 through 2. Nah, don't do well with Angst, and that's going to leave a lot of broken hearts behind.
The next chapter, I'm quite proud of. And I look forward to making each character a more powerful interaction than the last.
Thank you for Reviewing.The List
(#) Cateagle 2013-10-18
It's going to be msot interesting to see Hermione as the "Alpha" of the harem. Methinks she'll be careful enough to make sure they are all compatible with each other and her, as well as Harry.
I definitely agree that she's the only one it would be logical for Harry to put as Number One. It should be fascinating to see who are Two through Eight.The List
(#) Dragonlord27 2013-10-18
I have always liked HHr and I'd like to see HHr in the endingAuthor's response
The main story will be HHr, yes. But not exclusively. Since I don't do Angst and broken hearts, 2-10 have to get something too. Sharing is caring, right?
Thank you for reading and reviewing.The List
(#) lordamnesia 2013-10-22
Very nicely done! I love the tidbits of what went different, and the reactions so far from all the girls! Keep up the excellent work!
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