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Apples:Prologue:
(#) FanfictionAnonymous 2013-10-19
This is really awesome so far, I can't wait to read more!Author's response
Thank you x3Apples:Prologue:
(#) NotKissingYouGoodBye 2013-10-20
i'm really liking the sound of this X)can't wait for the next update.Author's response
It means a lot thank you cxApples:Prologue:
(#) insanecousinbenji 2013-10-22
Wow! This is really well written and interesting, I like all the description of Frank's thoughts, especially Gerard's hotness and creepiness, and Frank the believable stoner. It fits together really well and it knowing you have failed is a horrible feeling. I didn't quite get what it was going on about at the beginning- What does one strike mean? But anyway, I'll be looking forward to an update :)Author's response
Thank you so much. I'll explain: you know how when a batter in baseball misses two throws? And when the last ball is about to be throne "one strike your out" is usually said? it's a warning. And for frank that meant you fuck up one more time and your dropped from this class. That is why he was so angry. Because his teacher said one strike. Sorry about that it was a bit vague.Apples:Prologue:
(#) insanecousinbenji 2013-10-26
Ohh, being English I don't really get baseball but yeah I've heard that saying before, now it makes sense! wow what a harsh teacher, poor Frank
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