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• Ethereal

  (#) DeathbySpells 2013-10-19

  Great chapter! It's really an eye opener, can't wait for more chapters in the future!

  Author's response

  Thank you so much you're fabulous.

• Ethereal

  (#) CyanideCola 2013-10-20

  Why dafuq does this story have like vertually no reviews (seriously it needs like 2638537574252339383983 reviews instead)
  this is absolutly awesome
  update soon please
  Jade xø

  Author's response

  No one ever reviews my stuff and I don't get it, someone could say "woe u r shid @ werdz" and I'd be happy. XD

• Ethereal

  (#) insanecousinbenji 2013-10-20

  This is absolutely fantastic! The speech really flows and you really get across the feelings of you characters :) I couldn't help noticing it briefly changes to present tense at the end of the first paragraph, but yeah you're a really great writer.

  Author's response

  I could feel myself doing it and I stopped paying attention right as I was like "you are doing the thing" and it happened I apologize.
  Thank you though. XD

• Ethereal

  (#) zelda22314 2013-10-21

  Excellent chapter.really well written got totally caught up in the story...can't wait to see what happens next

  Author's response

  thank you so much!

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