- Long wait and a rather short chapter, somewhat disapointing.
Author's responseActually I was expecting more reviews like this. The chapter was getting very large, so I cut it, unevenly, but at an end to the "heir" storyline. Hopefully my second beta will get me the next chapter soon, and that one is bigger.
There are times I want to fire her, but she's worth twice what I pay her (2*0 = 0 :-), and besides being a good beta, she's my daughter.
I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
(#) ChrisLeBron 2006-08-19I love this story. Nicely done smart-but-not-too!Harry, and Luna's character is great, too. I notice you made sure she obsreved death up close (as in canon, just a different person), and had it affect her "grip on reality", but it seems to have gone away. Will it be a issue, or was it PTSD and to a degree dealt with? Again, great story.
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