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Apples:Prologue:
(#) insanecousinbenji 2013-11-18
Your writing flows from strength to strength as per usual ^_^ the only mistakes I saw were in the spellings of interesting and convenient and a missing speech mark after Gerard's speech but they don't detect from the story in any way or anything, looking forward to your next update!
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