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What Could Have Been
(#) Pointer 2013-11-25
The 'evil overlord' flash of red eye?
Enjoyed it.Author's response
It will all come out in the end Pointer. I have to say that I am a huge fan of HP fanfiction and have read many, many stories so I have a lot of influence from my favorite writers. I enjoy Kinsfire's and Jeconais' work, but also the length and time to set up the story line. I like the art and technique of their well told stories so I don't want to come off as a short, I had a plot but just want to finish this story because I am bored with it. I want to serve the idea I have justice with telling the tail well.What Could Have Been
(#) tricorvus 2014-05-31
Still liking it immensely. Love Goblin names. Everyone is creative and that's what I love. Spelled McGonagall wrong. I can't spell Peverell (?) to save my life, so no harm no foul there.
Great chapter
Rock onWhat Could Have Been
(#) ibskib 2014-11-07
Wizengomat, McGonagle, misspelling canon names is never a good sign. You really need to spend more time on proofreading, and perhaps make a habit of using the Potter Wiki so you get it right.Author's response
I don't have a beta, and I review as best I can. I am not getting paid for this so if you aren't offering to help then please don't complain about. I am offering my story not a paid for novel.
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