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• The Alvata Orphans

  (#) Busterdog282 2006-08-07

  so what do you think

• The Alvata Orphans

  (#) MarkPoa 2006-08-25

  Just a setup. Nothing exciting yet in Chapter 1. Makes me wonder what is up with all the reviews above. You could use some more editing of this work... the grammar and spelling need work... lots of work.

• The Alvata Orphans

  (#) eros_cupid 2006-08-26

  Holy macaroni, you are superb. But, I don't get why the heck you get bad rating.

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