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Too Young To Fall In Love
(#) Judas_Kiss 2014-04-12
I like it. It's cute, it's sweet it's just... It's really adorable! And I want to know what would happen if Vince ever finds out Nikki's dating Cindy. Oh, that'll be something! And, is Tommy gonna try to steal her from Nikki? Lol, I'm curious!
You do have some grammar mistakes, but I take it English is not your native language? The mistakes aren't that bad but I suggest just keep practicing and improving! I sucked way worse than you when I started out with these Crue stories, haha so I can't judge too much. Anyway, looking forward to more!
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