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The Definition of Friendship
1 reviewHarry and his friends make their descent through the trapdoor and into the lions' den.
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Son of a Snake
(#) Graybear32 2020-09-04
It's well thought out yet somehow lacking description.
Be unafraid to use pronouns and adverbs describing emotions and actions to paint a fuller picture.
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