Is it worth it? Can you even hear me?
Standing with your spotlight on me
Not enough to feed the hungry
I'm tired and I felt it for awhile now
I like it! I did notice a few wrong words, misspellings and some odd capitals, but its improved.
Well actually according to European English there is not a thing wrong with it :)
Mmmmm.... Cigar should not be capitalized and you put wondering instead of wandering.
But its all minor stuff like that.
I really like this chapter. It was creepy (and I approve of creepy things).
I must say I read the old story while it was up but I much prefer this one. There are a few spelling mistakes but only minor ones. Overall I really like the way it's going.
I really like this you should write more
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