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Naruto.Drabbles
(#) Afuna 2006-08-12
I like this drabble. It showcases Sakura's strength in so few words.
Can't decide whether I like "Sakura tries harder than she should..." or "Stopping aches more than following" better, so I won't try. I'll like them both equally (very much). Hah!
I like how the mood transitions from the desperation/frustration in the beginning to the deliberate effort of pulling back and calming down.
I'm curious about the last line though. I can't seem to make out whether it's Sakura's thoughts or a quote from something else.
Either way, it is a beautiful line. A nice and solid end to the piece.
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