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• The Secret Technique

  (#) VFSNAKE 2014-06-05

  Not bad. Keep going. I can't wait for Naruto and Hinata. Can't wait for more.

  Author's response

  Cheers and I'm trying but my muse is being fickle.
  
  NaruHina will happen, don't worry :)

• The Secret Technique

  (#) sakura89_luis 2014-06-05

  That was really hot. Thanks for the new update can wait for more, your doing a fantastic job on both stories, definitely one of my favorite authors.

  Author's response

  Thank you very much!
  
  Reviews like always make me want to write more. XD

• The Secret Technique

  (#) firetemplar415 2014-06-05

  Ooooo super pervy hinata!!!! loving it already!

  Author's response

  And when I write her, she just doesn't feel OOC to me...

• The Secret Technique

  (#) Akuma-Heika 2014-06-05

  Maybe have Hinata break? No longer being held back since her greatest insecurity is destroyed given that Naruto is screwing her. I have seen several fics with PervyHinata and they are funny...Hyuuga Siscest FTW!

• The Secret Technique

  (#) Malefix 2014-06-07

  Hanabi trumps Hinata anyday

  Author's response

  Ah, let us not talk of trumping...when he can have both! XD

• The Secret Technique

  (#) Frankenfran 2014-06-09

  I liked this chapter a great deal. Not looking forward to the hinata's part, she always comes out as boring, sad to say

• The Secret Technique

  (#) HenryDob 2014-06-11

  Hanabi and Anko are nice but I am waiting for Temari gets excited

  Author's response

  It'll happen...eventually. When my muse wakes up...

• The Secret Technique

  (#) Malefix 2014-06-12

  Keep doing Hanabi, she is exciting

• The Secret Technique

  (#) Akuma-Heika 2014-07-19

  Will Hinata ask Naruto to put his slave seal on her? It would fit with your Hinata and her...worship of Naruto to be made his Doll/Slave/Servant.
  
  Will naruto marry in this? For girls who are close to him and have to marry (Hinata, Hana [close by force], and Ino) will he still sleep with them afterwards? Will the girls have him put slave seals on their husbands? From what we have seen, the seal could be used to force a psychological and/or memory change; making them submissive to their wives in private and loyal to Naruto and completely okay with Naruto sleeping with their wives without being able to tell anyone directly or indirectly about the situation. A way to continue things with far less danger.
  
  Hinata helping out with Moegi's and Hanabi's sex ed would be a nice touch. They have no knowledge/experience with lesbian/yuri sex after all and Mebuki would have difficulties meeting them for such activities but Moegi can be called a friend of Hanabi and Hinata is her older sister so them being together is not that farfetched especially if Ino or Sakura join in to make it look like a girls night or something of that nature.
  
  Did anyone hear Moegi when she mentioned to Naruto that he cannot finish inside Hanabi?
  
  Hope some of these ideas help!
  
  PS: agreed with malefix on Hanabi being a entertaining read. Please continue to use her. Will we see moegi's first anal? have a feeling hinata will ask for it so that she is completely claimed by Naruto lol

• The Secret Technique

  (#) Akuma-Heika 2014-07-19

  forgot to add on, but with the slave seal you would have a confident Hinata whether private or if you want to make it public as well. it would be another reason for her to ask Naruto for the seal. with it forcing confidence as long as her mind is not deconstructed or buried she would become confident herself with her inhibitions and fears not affecting her for a time (or having less of an affect)

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