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(#) jadesabrexiv 2014-06-15
JSX again. I must say that this is a good start to an appetizing alternative to the travesty that was Book 7.
(Sorry, a late lunch is on the grill and it smells great. That and I'm hungry.)
Now, the only complaint I have is about the Memory Charms. Are you going to have it where the removal of the Charm allows the real memory to come back?
Or another method to describe the recovery of 'lost' memories.
Look forward the next chapter and thank you again.Arguments
(#) Cateagle 2014-06-23
A good start here and I look forward to seeing where you take it. It will be most interesting to see what they are like once all the things done to them are removed; I daresay that both their enemies and controllers (too varieties of the same thing, really) are not going to be happy with the result. I wonder what kind of flack Ron will get for leaving them and allowing them to go off to "who knows where" without control? I do hope he's severely chastised for that.
Hawaii offers a good place to train and plan and they clearly have access to the help they'll need. They really need a clandestine way of communicating with those they trust back in wizarding Britain and coordinating with them.Arguments
(#) CrescentFalling 2014-07-08
A very good start I'm quite excited to see how them being away from Ron will change Harry and Hermione's personalities considering they both tend to dumb themselves so Ron doesn't fell left out. I've always felt that Harry could have been a much better character without Ron holding him back with his petty jealously...same goes for Hermione, cant wait for their enemies to get what's coming for them.
Anyway, good chapter, eagerly awaiting the next update.
Keep up the good work!!!Arguments
(#) Bronze 2015-09-25
Oh gee, how could they possibly believe Dumbledore would do such things to them?! More like how long has the old goat f*** been doing it?! The only thing special to Dumbass is Dumbass himself! It'd be fro the greater good if Dumbass was forced to work the Goblin run Dragon dung removal job for Gringotts. The only down side to that in this story is he seems to be dead. Though I wouldn't put it past him to've faked his death all from his greater good of course. So one round from a Desert Eagle at close range should put paid to his delusions. And it is for the GREATER GOOD after all.Arguments
(#) Staryfury0901 2017-11-23
As cugan1 said. I've been waiting as well. Yeah know, the more I think about it the more I have to wonder does the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder truly want to win the war? He's done everything in his power so far to loose it. If Harry truly is the only one who can kill Voldiusmort as per the phoncy(phony prophecy), doing things the way he has, put your head between your knees and kiss your ass good bye. There is another reason the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder allowed his body to die. He was somewhere around one hundred and twenty years old. So say he had a Horcrux. Now all he needs is a much younger body to take over. Now seeing as what he's done to Harry's life among others, it's not too far fetched to think he already HAD a body awaiting him somewhere. I'd guess a body, male, age between nineteen and twenty-five. That way he's out of Hogwash and can make his new id and continue his greater good.Arguments
(#) Staryfury0901 2018-03-28
Nothing's changed since I last posted a review. I still very much agree with cugan1. I wish you'd finish this.
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