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Where sewage of youth drowned the spark in my teens
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Hey Katey, Why So Bitter? [STRIPPED]
(#) Mirazal 2014-08-12
So for school I have a summer reading assignment and supposedly I'm reading "real literature" but seriously fuck real literature if it cannot come CLOSE to the way YOUR writing can interest me and engage me and make me go holy shit that's good.
Damn, Syra, that was fantastic. Really really well done.
Also holy shit I didn't know you're posting stuff here again which is super cool.Author's response
Thank you!!! Wow, really???? Yeah, sometimes I feel like putting my thoughts out there...they don't deserve to be hidden away and forgotten. Aw dude. Thank you for the nice words.Hey Katey, Why So Bitter? [STRIPPED]
(#) nerds_assemble 2014-08-17
Mir's right on the whole literature thing. It's tough to find something this intriguing to read. Even though I do think she should've started her assignment earlier.
I really love how your stories end. They don't really end, they hint at an ending, but they don't just say "and that's how life was, forever and always" because that's not how life is.
Your description of love made it sound comforting and classy as hell. So, I'm a little floaty tonight and I don't know why (I can't stay focused on anything for longggg times and i'm so damn lightheaded). But what i mean is that I want to keep reading this story and I know how it's going to end and its' beautiful phrases haven't swung me any higher.
I hope you know what I mean and take my fucking compliment, bro. :)Hey Katey, Why So Bitter? [STRIPPED]
(#) nerds_assemble 2014-08-17
I swear I'll come back to this and leave a proper response when I've come off this cloud.
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