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I do not own Naruto, Sasuke, Kakashi, or Ficwad. Story speaks for itself...
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Sasuke came home and went straight into his bedroom to his computer. He logged onto the different fic-sites he had joined, to see how his stories were doing.
"Awesome! 227 hits on @++, plus six new reviews!" he exclaimed. His mouse started clicking on the different links to check his reviews, and he smiled proudly at his lovely reviewers' comments.
"They like me! They really like me!" he whispered. He continued to wipe a fake tear from his eye and went to the next site. --0^+@ gave him another four reviews.
"YOSH!" He pumped his fist in the air as he looked through those. Feeling a bit self conscious of using one of Naruto's favorite words, he looked around the room to make sure he was still alone. He was.
He continued now onto Ficwad. First he went to see how many hits he got. "Meh," he shrugged at the numbers.
This site isn't known yet, so he knew the numbers don't show as well as on his other sites. Then he checked his profile to view his rating and see if he had any new reviews for his new story. Sadly, he had not gained any new reviews. Again, he knew this site is also lacking in readers who actually review.
But something caught his attention before he exited out of the site. His rating. "Cliché??" he asked aloud, bewildered. "And the lowest possible rating?" He blinked at how someone would rate him so, and not leave a review as to why they disliked it so much, nor to point out what was "cliché" in his story.
This angered Sasuke. He looked at his IM box and saw that Kakashi Hatake was on.
iheartpot: you are not going to believe this
hentairocks: nani?
iheartpot: someone gave my new story a rating of "cliché" X{
hentairocks : you don't say?
iheartpot: where? do you see it?
hentairocks: nope. fw sucks about their rating system. it should be mandatory to review if you leave a rating
iheartpot: agreed
hentairocks: what you going to do?
iheartpot: shrugs
"Saaasukeee!!!" Naruto poked his head into Sasuke's room, randomly. "Whatchya doin'?"
"Talking to Kakashi about someone leaving me bad rates but not reviewing," Sasuke said, still clicking away at his keyboard.
"No way!" Naruto said, plopping down next to Sasuke on his bed. "Is it for that new story of yours?"
Sasuke nodded his head, fingers never hesitating. "Said it was "cliché."
"BULLSHIT!" Naruto bellowed, right into Sasuke's ear.
Sasuke glared over at Naruto. "Tell me about it. But please, use your inside voice."
Naruto glared right back at Sasuke. "Teme. But still, that's bull. You should do something about it."
"I am," he said with an evil grin.
"Whatchya going to do?" Naruto asked, scooting closer to his lover.
"Here, just read," he said, pulling up his and Kakashi's IM.
hentairocks: and so, once they click on the rating button, they have no choice but to leave a review...or their hard drive crashes >:)
iheartpot: ooh kakashi my man! you are a genius when it comes to viruses!
hentairocks: all in a day's work ^__~
iheartpot: thanks kakashi...mm naru is here so uhh.. i'm gonna be busy for a couple hours ^__~
hentairocks: have fun waggles eyebrows
"Man, Kakashi comes up with some of the coolest technology," Naruto said, smiling. He laid back on the bed next to Sasuke, reaching up to rub his back some.
"Mm, yes he does. But at least now, when someone dares to leave a rating, they have no choice but to review and give their reasons behind such a rate. It is only fair. If they're going to say it's bad, they have to point out what is bad. And the same goes for it being good," Sasuke finished, laying down beside Naruto.
Naruto winked at Sasuke, "Never mess with a fic-ka!"
Sasuke's grin grew, and then it turned mischievous. He grabbed Naruto by the arms and pulled him on top of him. "Make me forget," he asked.
Naruto waggled his brows before he leaned down and captured Sasuke's lips, taking the edge off Sasuke as quickly as it had appeared.
The End.
A/N: Yep, story speaks for itself. ^__^ Oh, and no actual viruses were harmed coughusedcough during the making of this fic.
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Sasuke came home and went straight into his bedroom to his computer. He logged onto the different fic-sites he had joined, to see how his stories were doing.
"Awesome! 227 hits on @++, plus six new reviews!" he exclaimed. His mouse started clicking on the different links to check his reviews, and he smiled proudly at his lovely reviewers' comments.
"They like me! They really like me!" he whispered. He continued to wipe a fake tear from his eye and went to the next site. --0^+@ gave him another four reviews.
"YOSH!" He pumped his fist in the air as he looked through those. Feeling a bit self conscious of using one of Naruto's favorite words, he looked around the room to make sure he was still alone. He was.
He continued now onto Ficwad. First he went to see how many hits he got. "Meh," he shrugged at the numbers.
This site isn't known yet, so he knew the numbers don't show as well as on his other sites. Then he checked his profile to view his rating and see if he had any new reviews for his new story. Sadly, he had not gained any new reviews. Again, he knew this site is also lacking in readers who actually review.
But something caught his attention before he exited out of the site. His rating. "Cliché??" he asked aloud, bewildered. "And the lowest possible rating?" He blinked at how someone would rate him so, and not leave a review as to why they disliked it so much, nor to point out what was "cliché" in his story.
This angered Sasuke. He looked at his IM box and saw that Kakashi Hatake was on.
iheartpot: you are not going to believe this
hentairocks: nani?
iheartpot: someone gave my new story a rating of "cliché" X{
hentairocks : you don't say?
iheartpot: where? do you see it?
hentairocks: nope. fw sucks about their rating system. it should be mandatory to review if you leave a rating
iheartpot: agreed
hentairocks: what you going to do?
iheartpot: shrugs
"Saaasukeee!!!" Naruto poked his head into Sasuke's room, randomly. "Whatchya doin'?"
"Talking to Kakashi about someone leaving me bad rates but not reviewing," Sasuke said, still clicking away at his keyboard.
"No way!" Naruto said, plopping down next to Sasuke on his bed. "Is it for that new story of yours?"
Sasuke nodded his head, fingers never hesitating. "Said it was "cliché."
"BULLSHIT!" Naruto bellowed, right into Sasuke's ear.
Sasuke glared over at Naruto. "Tell me about it. But please, use your inside voice."
Naruto glared right back at Sasuke. "Teme. But still, that's bull. You should do something about it."
"I am," he said with an evil grin.
"Whatchya going to do?" Naruto asked, scooting closer to his lover.
"Here, just read," he said, pulling up his and Kakashi's IM.
hentairocks: and so, once they click on the rating button, they have no choice but to leave a review...or their hard drive crashes >:)
iheartpot: ooh kakashi my man! you are a genius when it comes to viruses!
hentairocks: all in a day's work ^__~
iheartpot: thanks kakashi...mm naru is here so uhh.. i'm gonna be busy for a couple hours ^__~
hentairocks: have fun waggles eyebrows
"Man, Kakashi comes up with some of the coolest technology," Naruto said, smiling. He laid back on the bed next to Sasuke, reaching up to rub his back some.
"Mm, yes he does. But at least now, when someone dares to leave a rating, they have no choice but to review and give their reasons behind such a rate. It is only fair. If they're going to say it's bad, they have to point out what is bad. And the same goes for it being good," Sasuke finished, laying down beside Naruto.
Naruto winked at Sasuke, "Never mess with a fic-ka!"
Sasuke's grin grew, and then it turned mischievous. He grabbed Naruto by the arms and pulled him on top of him. "Make me forget," he asked.
Naruto waggled his brows before he leaned down and captured Sasuke's lips, taking the edge off Sasuke as quickly as it had appeared.
The End.
A/N: Yep, story speaks for itself. ^__^ Oh, and no actual viruses were harmed coughusedcough during the making of this fic.
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