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[war arc] Left behind
(#) tweety_ich 2006-01-27
I thought the original was already briliant. But this one speachless... So I knew how the story would end it cept me and didn't let go till I read it to the end. Wonderful! The best sentence however was "Angry at being denied, angry at having his possession taken from him, and like a spoilt child ready to shout and scream until it was returned." Also the story was very sad I couldn't stop laughing. Asami stamping on the floor crying like a child was just too much for my imagination ^^
Thanks for writing this story![war arc] Left behind
(#) dawnraptor 2014-04-23
How true! The original fic was awesome, but this one stole my breath away. Asami is unraveling, how sad! But we know all (something) is good at the end, so we aren't too much on edge.
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