(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-08-13Holy shit, you're back! I'm going to have to reread both stories all over again, though that'll be a project for another day. I'm too tired to handle all of that anger at Dumbledore and Neville.
The conversation between Harry, Draco and Neville was very well done. It seems as though you're waiting until the end of second year to have Dumbledore and the others figure out just who Harry really is. I'm a bit curious as to whether or not you'll kill Neville to do it. Harry might be immune to a basilisk's stare, now that I think of it...At any rate, it'd make for an interesting twist to have Harry save Ginny given how she's behaving towards Neville, whether or not the rest of the school knows about it.
Despite loving the plethora of possibilities for the end of this story going through my head, nothing quite tops imagining Remus' conversation with Dumbledore after he finds out whose invisibility cloak it really is.
Great chapter, can't wait for the next one.
- I just find your stories and I have been reading all day. I belive they are great, the handicap of Harry is challenging and is perfect that all the characters that normally will help Harry are treating him like a cripple(I just hope that Hermione have learn the lesson and she treat him normal, she is my favorite character). The form Dumbledore is trying to form a new weapon and ignoring Harry is so awful, like once he is not possible to him to destroy Voldemort then he his just cast aside.
well I can't wait to read next chapter and see what will happen.
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