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Contact with the outside world
1 reviewSeto finally gets through to someone who can help. News of what has caused the crash leads to mixed emotions and a surprising discovery by Mai.
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The lift
(#) sunfalling 2006-08-15
I was actually pleasantly surprised by how much I enjoyed these chapters. The premise is not exactly original (here in America, at least, "Trapped in the Elevator" or "Locked in the Library" are only slightly less prevalent than "Stuck in the Broom Closet" as environments for blooming sexual tension).
Yet you have infused the setting with some great dialogue and details. Mai has always been my favorite female in the series and I love her characterization here. The banter she shares with Kaiba had me smiling and chuckling throughout. I also enjoyed your descriptions of the characters through each other's eyes. You have a really fun, engaging style and I hope you keep it up.Author's response
Cheers for the review. I do apologise for the unoriginal idea and it is an idea as clichéd in England as it is in America, however, with a character like Mai, and especially Seto, I couldn't think why they would ever talk if they weren't forced to! I'm actually finding it hard to get them to be nice to each other as it is (does that make sense?!).
Thanks for taking the time to review.
Jen
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