Now that the Dark Lord has returned, the Order of the Phoenix must call in outside help to train their boy savior. Enter one officer used to dealing with the weird, Colonel Jack O'Neill...
Interesting start, I would prefer slightly longer chapters to chapters that are basically one scene. Grammer is great, ditto to diction and thought; The storyline you have setup looks like it has potential, keep on writing. I can't wait to see Jack's reaction to magic...
As a fan of both universes, I can honestly say I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
I loved how this story is progressing. You've done such a wonderful job of keeping the plotline believable and yet keeping everyone in character.
Abby Jack, bloody pirate.
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