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Chapter 1: The Paths Taken
5 reviewsAU. The world can be forever changed by the simplest of choices. When Sakura takes a different path home one day after the Academy, the events that follow will shake the world. Konoha, what have yo...
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Herald of the End
(#) HellBlazer695 2015-01-19
The grammar could use some work, but other than that it has a decent plot, I would definitely be interested in seeing more chapters to this, to see where it goes from here.Herald of the End
(#) The_Naulkner 2015-05-07
It was a good start and id totally continue to read if you decide to add more chapters in fact I would like more chapters if its not a bother.Herald of the End
(#) shawa666 2015-05-14
Just a presentation tip, space out your paragraphs. It reduces the wall of text effect. Grammar needs some work, but it's not unbearable. 3/5
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