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Boredom
(#) studentnumber24601 2005-06-16
Aww, cute! I know I've read this before but I still enjoy it. Especially Dutchy getting all hot and bothered by nekkid!Specs. Because... yum, nekkid!Specs. Mm mm good.
(As a side note, not dealing with the story itself, you might want to consider putting an extra blank line between paragraphs; it makes it a little bit easier to read when the paragraphs are more clear.)
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