- OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! Its about bloody flipping time somebody used them giant ass spiders....shivers anyways awesome chapter and addition to an awesome story and I seriously can't wait to read the next chapter so do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)
Author's responseI pictured one of those big melees from when I used to play D&D lo those many years ago.
Your character "Lord Voldemort" and your party consisting of 5 Minions and your Necrodragon is attempting to formalize your alliance with the werewolves. Suddenly there is popping noises and about 40 giant spiders appear in your midst. There is also a giant, a cerebus and a young dragon. Roll for initiative. :)
(#) DavidMPotter 2006-08-19Frickin Steller!!! I am so looking forward to the next chapter as I am Jonesing for a fix! Please post soon... I have needs.
Author's responseSorry my friend. 2 weeks until next update. You'll have to settle for a Bungle in the Jungle update next week. Jim
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-08-20Fantastic use of Hagrid, that's all I've got to say.
Author's responseI have always found Hagrid to be an interesting character. He likes playing with dangerous things, yet most authors treat him as an oaf who exists to blurt out secret information that he has been entrusted with or comic relief. I wanted to go a slightly different route. Jim
- Bravo! Well done ambush, and I can't wait to see what Harry has planned.
Author's responseThanks. I thought I had already responded, but apparently not. The conclusion to the battle is up and I hope you find it a satisfying payoff for a Dumbledore and Voldy duel.
(#) CootiePatootie 2006-08-24Damn. You are a phenomenally gifted writer. I am glad Susan is more-or-less okay. Okay, I know losing a foot is gruesome, but after the Gringott's fight I honestly was afraid you had killed her off, and it wasn't going to be pretty.
Poor Luna, I like her. I hope someone can help her...if nothing else to calm her spirit.
Love Harry in vengeance mode.
And a Voldie cliffie...most excellent. I look forward to the next update. Of course I look forward to the other story's update too...every new update I say "this one is my favorite by JBern" but when the other one gets updated, then I have to say, "no this one is my favorite." You are making me schizo...
Author's responseThanks. Tell both of your personalities that I said I am sorry for making you schizo.
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