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• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) Shaggy37 2006-08-19

  OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! Its about bloody flipping time somebody used them giant ass spiders....shivers anyways awesome chapter and addition to an awesome story and I seriously can't wait to read the next chapter so do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

  Author's response

  I pictured one of those big melees from when I used to play D&D lo those many years ago.
  
  Your character "Lord Voldemort" and your party consisting of 5 Minions and your Necrodragon is attempting to formalize your alliance with the werewolves. Suddenly there is popping noises and about 40 giant spiders appear in your midst. There is also a giant, a cerebus and a young dragon. Roll for initiative. :)
  
  Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) Gibby 2006-08-19

  Damn good as always. As for your A/N not many could much less would. Keep up the good writing.
  
  -Gibby

  Author's response

  I post my full author's notes on DLP. Thanks for the compliments. Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) DavidMPotter 2006-08-19

  Frickin Steller!!! I am so looking forward to the next chapter as I am Jonesing for a fix! Please post soon... I have needs.

  Author's response

  Sorry my friend. 2 weeks until next update. You'll have to settle for a Bungle in the Jungle update next week. Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) snowman 2006-08-19

  Great work.

  Author's response

  Thanks for the review. Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-08-20

  Fantastic use of Hagrid, that's all I've got to say.

  Author's response

  I have always found Hagrid to be an interesting character. He likes playing with dangerous things, yet most authors treat him as an oaf who exists to blurt out secret information that he has been entrusted with or comic relief. I wanted to go a slightly different route. Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) DrT 2006-08-22

  Bravo! Well done ambush, and I can't wait to see what Harry has planned.
  
  "T"

  Author's response

  Thanks. I thought I had already responded, but apparently not. The conclusion to the battle is up and I hope you find it a satisfying payoff for a Dumbledore and Voldy duel.
  
  Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) CootiePatootie 2006-08-24

  Damn. You are a phenomenally gifted writer. I am glad Susan is more-or-less okay. Okay, I know losing a foot is gruesome, but after the Gringott's fight I honestly was afraid you had killed her off, and it wasn't going to be pretty.
  
  Poor Luna, I like her. I hope someone can help her...if nothing else to calm her spirit.
  
  Love Harry in vengeance mode.
  
  And a Voldie cliffie...most excellent. I look forward to the next update. Of course I look forward to the other story's update too...every new update I say "this one is my favorite by JBern" but when the other one gets updated, then I have to say, "no this one is my favorite." You are making me schizo...
  
  Cheers,
  
  Cassie

  Author's response

  Thanks. Tell both of your personalities that I said I am sorry for making you schizo.
  
  Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) CootiePatootie 2006-08-24

  ps. sorry, I forgot...the bit with Hagrid and the Acromantulae and Grawp WOW. SO good. I love a Hagrid that kicks booty.
  
  Cassie

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2006-10-01

  Good one, time to make 'em squeal.
  
  gunny

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) BernieceMcKee 2021-05-24

  Accidentally came across your text and I really liked it. You write well, I especially liked how you compose dialogues. It can be seen that you have a well-developed fantasy. I would read your work more. All in all, great work! Keep it up

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