I'm a Malfoy, and Malfoys never smile.
That was pretty interesting. I don't actually read Draco/Pansy stoires but this one was pretty good. She seems so innocent the way you wrote her. Good job!
Very repetitive. Pithy concept but I just couldn't overlook the incessant "Malfoys never smile". I'll probably see that line in my sleep tonight.
Very, very good. Tastefully written, and an excellent style. I'd offer criticisms, but I have none - keep up the writing!
Author\'s Response: thank you for reading! =)
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