(#) dreamcatchersfic 2006-08-27This was very moving. And there were no typos that I saw. ;) I wish I could give more constructive criticism but there was little to actually pick at. It was a nice 'character musing'.
Normally I'm not fond of simple reminiscing but with shorter fics it feels more palatable. And since this lead to a touching conclusion, it felt worthwhile. Nice work.
(#) Cerise_Tennyo 2006-09-04sniffle
What a lovely little 'snapshot'. Everything flowed together, the mood, the setting, the introspection. I can't even wish this was longer, as it ends on just the right note of wistfulness. A beautiful story that makes me hurt for poor Cloud and Zack all over again. You really did them justice here. Good job.
- Aw! Super cute and sniffly all at the same time - it's nice to see a Cloud that is moving on from his past rather than forgetting it or being crushed by what he's lost. I'm sure Zack got that sentiment wherever he is and, lover of happy endings that I am, I see this ending the same way Cloud envisages it.
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