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silver dragon
(#) Ithilwen 2006-08-30
This story needs some scrubbing yet. For example, each time there's a new speaker, there should be a new paragraph. A run through spellchecker and a care for capitalization would help too.Author's response
thanks. but my sis edits my stories. and my..well our comp dosent have spell check. and what do you mean by 'new speaker'? sorry if this bothers you but im still we are still learning. thank you for readning my story though!silver dragon
(#) NikkiJ 2006-10-22
Mary Sue's ahoy!
Things you need to learn:
Grammar
Puntuation and Capitalization
If you computer doesn't have spellcheck then look the word up. It's called Dictionary.com
Cannon rules
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