Categories > Original > Fantasy > souress koko and the stone of caious.
new school
7 reviewsthis really gets into the plot. hope you like it. since i got 3 reviews, i update 3 chapters.this chapter is short.
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souress koko and the stone of caious.
(#) Ithilwen 2006-09-04
A beta-reader is someone whom an author trusts to read his or her stories before they are posted to an archive site. A beta reader can check for anything from spelling and grammar errors to characterization to long-term plot. If you need a beta, you can go to the "writing tips" or "introductions" sections of the forum and make a post asking for one. Say in the post whether you want a beta for just spelling and grammar or whether you want a full story editor.
Authors can sometimes use more than one beta on the same story, especially when the betas have different talents.souress koko and the stone of caious.
(#) NightScribe 2006-09-12
I realize this has been said before, but spellchecking is important. I had a difficult time understanding what was going on. The events from chap 1 to chap 2 were jarring; I wasn't sure at first if I was reading a continuation of the same story or not. Are you working from an outline? If not, consider it. By creating one, it will help you to focus and organize your thoughts better and a beta could guide you in plot development. Also, whenever a new character begins speaking, it should be treated as a new paragraph; several characters talking in the same paragraph is not only confusing, but disrupts the narrative flow.souress koko and the stone of caious.
(#) Adaku-chan 2006-10-14
Ok, I'm not so good at finding grammar mistakes, but from the past reviews, I say that I really agree with them. You should ger a beta to check over your stories. Keep trying. Till next time
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