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Private Eye Sam
(#) Ithilwen 2005-11-26
Hmm. I wouldn't call this a "story" in the traditional sense. It's more of a flashfic. Still, the twist at the end and all of the hinting... I guess he wasn't just the next guy to use the office. Heh heh heh!Private Eye Sam
(#) Rous 2007-02-15
Great! All the elements are here for a good story. You build things nicely and then twist them wickedly at the end. Now, if you cut some words (not recommended) you would have a trebble; and if you added about 75, you would have a quadbble, which is very doable.
Thank you for sharing.
rous
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