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Darkness' Shadows

by darks00 3 reviews

Hello darkness...my friend I trust in your shadows I can hide It's only you I can trust in the end To kill the pain, I tried...

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama - Published: 2006-09-06 - Updated: 2006-09-07 - 135 words - Complete

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Darkness' Shadows

(#) Orual 2006-10-16

I like the way you twisted fear around, as well as the way that darkness wasn't you embodiment of "evil". The end was a little cliche; I see too much poetry that ends in death. It's just over dramatic. But then, poetry is emotional and you dida good job of conveying that. Keep writing :)
Darkness' Shadows

(#) Smiley02 2007-10-12

Darks I just love your poetry!

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