- Bit too foggy for me! I couldn't work it out - not the story, just the stranger. I can see this really working as a prologue as it definitely left me wanting to find out more. Well written as always!
Author's response"As always"? Why thank you; make me feel like I have a groupie or something. I hope the following chapters, when they come, live up to your expectations
- Oh, and 'Minutes, each containing seconds worth an hour apiece' - is a really nice line. Just thought I'd mention it.
P.S. I'll go away now - you're probably bored of hearing from me!
Author's responseOh, gooy, that's one of my favorite lines! Glad it worked. As long as you stick to thoughtful reviews, I'll never get tired of hearing from you
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