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To Duel For Honor
8 reviewsA chance remark by Moody triggers a confrontation. It's not pretty. HT, for those into ships, but it's not that important to the story.
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To Duel For Honor
(#) jbfritz 2006-09-16
Great story!Author's response
Thanks! Really glad you enjoyed it! It was fun to write!To Duel For Honor
(#) FujiwaraHamano 2006-09-25
I need to bring something in your story to your attention, if only because I am a nit-picker for technical details.
"I've confirmed it. He made a total of 6 Horcruxes, with himself as the 7th for magical power. The diary is indeed one, and he did not know where it was, nor that it had been destroyed. The others are a ring from his Father, a locket, from his mother, that was Salazar Slytherin's, a pair of cups that belonged to Helga Hufflepuff, a dagger that belonged to Rowena Ravenclaw, a gauntlet that Godric Gryffindor once wore in battle, and finally, his snake, Nagini.
If you look closely, you clearly list seven Horcuxes, wihout listing Voldemort himself, after stating that he was the seventh.Author's response
Well, DRAT! You're right. You're the first in quite a few reviews of this story to catch that one, but you're right! Thanks, I need the nit-picking! Please, feel free to bring any more nits to my attention! Especially if they're in Family Matters - Loose Ends, since that one is still in progress!
I'll fix that in the eventual re-write - because this version just doesn't feel fleshed out enough to me.
And thanks for reading! I hope you enjoyed the story, otherwise!To Duel For Honor
(#) 10dedfish 2007-03-10
Pretty cool. I esp. like the quote for Rhyme of the Ancient Mariner, although, not quite sure you used it.Author's response
Well, the focal point of the story seemed to be the duel at the Beginning of the Year Feast, which was certainly a merry din to hear at the Feast that was set.
Harry's Heritage might could use an Ancient Mariner quote too - something about the albatross... HummmmmmmmmmmmmmTo Duel For Honor
(#) blade87 2008-01-15
cool short story. i liked it a lot.Author's response
Thanks! It's by far my most popular story!To Duel For Honor
(#) JaCeeisme 2009-03-29
A very enjoyable story. Thank you for sharing it. I caught a few grammatical errors, but nothing worse than what JKR subjected us to. (grin)
JaCeeTo Duel For Honor
(#) goku90504 2013-03-18
typo
, the he got into bed,
then
he could actual apparate into Hogwarts through the wards,
actually
as for the horcrux list he lists 8 plus voldie for 9 a pair of cups means two cups means two horcrux's
One the arguments about tradition settled down,
once
aside from the typos a great story
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