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Dilectio's Primoris Erratum!
1 review(Collaboration with a friend) Lovette and Luminita were just normal girls living in the 19th Century, but it all changed when they find a injured man in a river. They decide they will shelter and n...
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Dilectio's Primoris Erratum!
(#) herk444 2006-10-02
Well, It's ok. I know it would be better if the girls were to speak in more... erm... olden terms. Like, no contractions or "Oh my god!" 's. If the dialogue were to be changed, it would be very good. Try and not let Dracula get too out of character.
--herkie
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