- Been following this story a while. I don't review stories that are "in process" often as I'm usually not patient enough to wait. That having been said this is and has been a much better than average story. Harry is not perfect but not pathetic either which is not easy to pull off. Nobody is acting too OOC and you have a solid storyline. I'd like to see Daphne a little more fleshed out as she seems very reactive and not proactive enough. Tracy is very well written as are the rest. Please continue and finish this story, I'm enjoying it very much.
Author's responseI appreciate your kind words. I know someone like Daphne, very reactive rather than proactive. I will give Daphne credit though as she did come up with the plan to remove Gerald as head of the Greengrass house and their businesses. Thanks for reading! ~EJ
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