(#) white_aster 2006-09-18a;lksdjfholycrap. Ok. Something more articulate this time: OW. Just the whole thing is so evocative and bittersweet and then at the end OW. But yet so very much more realistic than canon. You pull no punches with your writing, and it shows and is all the more powerful for it. Raw and bleeding and feeling so TRUE.
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