Sometimes, you just can't let go.
Your story ideas never fail to amaze me, you know. This could have been utterly disgusting, but it isn't, because it makes the reader feel for Rachel. Poor stubborn zombie Rachel.
This is really creepy, and fabulously done. I like it a lot, even though it makes my skin crawl. I also like her stubbornness, and his, and how they both go on pretending nothing's wrong. The tiny glimpse of Celes through Rachel's eyes is amazing.
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