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The Time-Turner
3 reviewsSix months after Harry Potter defeated the Dark Lord, Voldemort, someone decided to turn back time and change history where Harry Potter was reduced to nothing more than a myth. Strangely, only Dra...
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The Time-Turner
(#) HPismyforte 2020-10-09
This is great... Better grammar than most... You also make it sound just like the characters... Nice work... However, you could've made the chapters a bit longer so that readers have a longer reading time...Author's response
Hi, thanks for reading my story. The chapters will get longer, I promise. :)
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