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• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-09-23

  So much buildup! I really can't wait for the final duel(s) to take place.

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) Shaggy37 2006-09-23

  OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! that was freaking awesome, I Siriusly can't wait for the next chapter! I love how Moldieshorts and Bella don't really want the baby, you could always have Harry and them add a stipulation that the baby goes to Sirius because he is related to Bella and the baby will technically be a black by birth, just a thought. anyways do keep up the outstandingly amazingly awesome work and update soon please:):):):)

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) kellypassion 2006-09-23

  please don't make me blieve thar Harry is a 5 mintue man that is just wrong

  Author's response

  Why? Five minutes, including foreplay and after play, isn't all that much time, but nor is it too short.
  
  "T"

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) snowman 2006-09-23

  Great chapters.

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) mekareami 2006-09-25

  Awesome story!! I so look forward to the next update. I always enjoy tales where Dumbledore doesn't get to play god. Thank you for writing and I hope there is more soon :)

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) MasterKtulu 2006-09-26

  Five minutes!? Couldn’t you just have lied like everyone else and said that he lasted an hour or at the very least twenty minutes? Anyway, great chapter and I’ll be watching out for the next update.

  Author's response

  Harry is thirteen! Five minutes, including foreplay and cuddling, is pretty amazing for him!
  
  "T"

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) banner 2006-09-27

  This story is so intelligent and perceptive. You explain highly complex ideas simply and clearly.

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2006-09-28

  Interesting.
  
  gunny

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) saugart 2006-09-29

  A nice job. That was a nice simple sex scene -- nothing smutty, yet you got the point across, and I thought "aww, shucks."

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) brad 2006-10-03

  Well, I'm glad that the two will at least be able to send letters with their closest (only adult?) friends back home.
  
  The bit about Sirius trying to work behind Harry's back, pushing the pure blood line - or separation from the Muggle world - was very interesting and clever, I thought, particularly here where Harry explains why Sirius went that way. Good psychology, good stuff.
  
  And so the kids consumate their marriage. I know you'd mentioned a couple of times that Harry was around 19 years old mentally, and Hermione a couple of years old, thus - presumably - getting around sex between minors, but still, the idea of two thirteen year old bodies doing the deed .... ewww. I'm a stodgy old fellow I guess.
  
  (I still liked the dialogue between them ... Hermione talking 'breathlessly', 'nearly begging', etc)

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