- OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! that was freaking awesome, I Siriusly can't wait for the next chapter! I love how Moldieshorts and Bella don't really want the baby, you could always have Harry and them add a stipulation that the baby goes to Sirius because he is related to Bella and the baby will technically be a black by birth, just a thought. anyways do keep up the outstandingly amazingly awesome work and update soon please:):):):)
(#) MasterKtulu 2006-09-26Five minutes!? Couldn’t you just have lied like everyone else and said that he lasted an hour or at the very least twenty minutes? Anyway, great chapter and I’ll be watching out for the next update.
Author's responseHarry is thirteen! Five minutes, including foreplay and cuddling, is pretty amazing for him!
- Well, I'm glad that the two will at least be able to send letters with their closest (only adult?) friends back home.
The bit about Sirius trying to work behind Harry's back, pushing the pure blood line - or separation from the Muggle world - was very interesting and clever, I thought, particularly here where Harry explains why Sirius went that way. Good psychology, good stuff.
And so the kids consumate their marriage. I know you'd mentioned a couple of times that Harry was around 19 years old mentally, and Hermione a couple of years old, thus - presumably - getting around sex between minors, but still, the idea of two thirteen year old bodies doing the deed .... ewww. I'm a stodgy old fellow I guess.
(I still liked the dialogue between them ... Hermione talking 'breathlessly', 'nearly begging', etc)
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