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(#) uberstylishchic 2022-11-05
What a lovely story! I've always loved vampires. I just don't get peoples fascination with zombies instead! Stacy and Max reminded me of Norma Desmond and the butler Max in Sunset Boulevard. Is that where you got your inspiration?Author's response
Yes! I'm glad you caught that. Most young people have never even seen Sunset Boulevard. I simply combined the names of the actresses who played Norma and the Toreador vampiress from Kindred: The Embraced, Gloria Swanson and Stacy Haiduk.Lasombra
(#) leavemealone 2022-11-05
I just saw the vampire flick The Invitation and thought this could be the next big thing.Lasombra
(#) overthetopglam 2022-11-09
Like I said I'm not a writer that's why I don't have a clue what I'm doing. I'm simply a storyteller. Most intelligent writers know exactly the proper way to type but sometimes suffer from writers block. Thankfully I have a very active imagination. I just need a little help is all. And isn't that what editors and proofreaders are for. Forgive any grammatical errors, misuse of words or phrase, spacing, incorrect punctuations or whatnot. My goal is to tell a good story and hope someone out there likes it but if not then that's fine. You can't please everyone. Mistakes can be fixed but putting a smile on a persons face is priceless!
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