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A Horrible Halloween Party
3 reviewsA girl's life is as horrible as horrible gets. What happens when she meets a gentleman vampire and is invited to his home?
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Vampyre's Heart
(#) herk444 2006-09-27
I liked it, like, how she had no idea what "OMG" mean't. But it just seemed a bit unlikely that a vampire would declare himself so openly...I dunno. Just struck me.
Love the descriptions... If you had time, do you think you rcould read my story? It does deal with vampires.
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(#) Adaku-chan 2006-10-14
Hey, this is good---but what you should do is spearate the paragraph and the dialouge so it won't be so confusing. Other than that, great work. Till next time
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