Edmund's not a very good chess player, but he wins at other things.
(#) Orual 2006-10-19
Very nice. I really liked how you explained Edmund's title of "just." It seems sensible that his first hand experience with justice and mercy would leave that sort of impression on him. The "sire" and "your majesty" bits made me laugh. Great job.
Ha! Insightful, original, lots of fun. As the author's intro says, there's more than one way to win.
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