FicWad

Categories > Books > Chronicles of Narnia

Reviews

• Checkmate

  (#) Orual 2006-10-19

  Very nice. I really liked how you explained Edmund's title of "just." It seems sensible that his first hand experience with justice and mercy would leave that sort of impression on him. The "sire" and "your majesty" bits made me laugh. Great job.

• Checkmate

  (#) LadyLapisLazuli 2006-11-01

  Great story!

• Checkmate

  (#) bgoldnyxnet 2008-12-17

  Ha! Insightful, original, lots of fun. As the author's intro says, there's more than one way to win.

• Checkmate

  (#) mina09 5 hours ago

  Hi!
  I finished your story and honestly, I was very impressed. The expressions, pacing, and drama are so strong that it feels perfect for a comic format. If adapted into a comic or Webtoon, it could attract even more people.
  I create Webtoons, comics, and character art. If you’re ever curious about how it might look visually, feel free to reach out to me.
  Discord: minakn0ws | Instagram: eve_verse_
  Loved your work!
  

Sign up to review this story.